Hmm... A track that focuses mainly on a piano eh? Er... One thing I think your piano really lacks is dynamics. In other words, I feel like every note the piano plays is at the same volume, or is just too loud, especially the bass part of the piano, which makes the mix sound really muddy mixed with the amount of reeverb it gets. You could fix this by messing around with the velocity of said note, which also means how loud it would play. You could probably try EQing the piano, to make space for the other sounds playing, or you can just lower the volume of it a bit, seems a bit too loud. Maybe you could also pair up the piano chords [also known as bass part of the piano] with some pads or something? To make your track sound a bit fuller and alive. [depends on the sound you chose tho] Overall, this songs pretty decent as of the moment.

Now I'm not giving you a 2.5 rating just because it's not good, it's more like it's the regular house song anyone can find if they do minimal effort to search for it. Other than that, this is okay I guess, this is "chill" after all, a thing that you were aiming the whole time you were producing this song. It kind of got boring after the first drop, where everything is almost the same. In other words, repetitive. Like, try changing the melody once in a while, maybe even the chords, etc. But hey, don't feel too bad, because the sounds other than the melody [vocals, drums, etc.] make up for that repetitive melody and chords. Overall, just continue producing your own thing, stay inspired, all those motivational stuff.

Oh wow. At first I didn't like your other song that hit the popular audio that day, Sakura that much, but listening to this song, I can say that "Twilight Redux" > "Sakura". You really nailed it with this song. But I do think that the guitars pretty lacking, and as mentioned before, it's repetitive, especially the drops. Overall, nice!

P.S. If you ever get to read this, did you actually played a real guitar in this song, or was the guitar synthesized? Just curious.